art was incredibly good and ik the author said in their note that they thought this was very long already compared to what they initially envisioned but if anything i think this couldve been way longer. i wouldve been really interested in seeing bryn’s backstory and i wouldve loved to see a bit of their relationship after the final fight. also a little sad we didnt get to SEE the final fight. definitely couldve been a 30+ chapter series and its a shame that a lot of short stories like these dont get enough runtime to show us more, compared to a lot of really long series that overstay their welcome.
art was incredibly good and ik the author said in their note that they thought this was very long already compared to what they initially envisioned but if anything i think this couldve been way longer. i wouldve been really interested in seeing bryn’s backstory and i wouldve loved to see a bit of their relationship after the final fight. also a little sad we didnt get to SEE the final fight. definitely couldve been a 30+ chapter series and its a shame that a lot of short stories like these dont get enough runtime to show us more, compared to a lot of really long series that overstay their welcome.