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ch. 58

uly October 5, 2026 5:12 pm

the premise is good but the execution is abit lacking. why start from the bottom up with teenage disciples when you only have ten years? i understand that future leaders are in the groups but thats just two future warriors who might have gathered resistance groups. why not go to peak martial artists at the present time and try to form an alliance or a group and build from there and then find the exceptional talents? it would be much more efficient to gather the upper orthodox and make them stronger instead of betting on the future of humanity on two kids. why kill powerful martial artists who can fight the alien invasion like yama the demon slayer? i havent read the novel so forgive me if im being stupid and its all explained better there. i just find the character goal to be meandering and not tight enough of a plot in the manhwa

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