maybe it’s because the mc only has wins and experiences little to no struggles that the wins end up feeling a little draggy. don’t get me wrong, I still enjoyed the read. I just wish there was at least a little pause in between where the mc takes a break or spend some time with his family. and maybe also some incident where his win wasn’t so guaranteed that would allow for some tension to build. still, its a decent read
maybe it’s because the mc only has wins and experiences little to no struggles that the wins end up feeling a little draggy. don’t get me wrong, I still enjoyed the read. I just wish there was at least a little pause in between where the mc takes a break or spend some time with his family. and maybe also some incident where his win wasn’t so guaranteed that would allow for some tension to build. still, its a decent read