Isn’t it going too fast without proper storytelling? They show the father and mother's death so merely. Hmm I feel like it would've been better to show their death in chapter 3 or 4 through storytelling, with a little explanation. The art is good, but the way everything is going feels rushed and boring. There's no fluidity in the writting..
wdym they showed his death enough I feel like and there’s not much to show of her mother’s she died in bed after giving birth no? they clearly showed the consequences and the rest about how he was connected with the sorcerer is going to be revealed eventually
Isn’t it going too fast without proper storytelling? They show the father and mother's death so merely. Hmm I feel like it would've been better to show their death in chapter 3 or 4 through storytelling, with a little explanation. The art is good, but the way everything is going feels rushed and boring. There's no fluidity in the writting..