The pacing of this story is something else. (Horrid) Things are happening in such rapid succession, the necessary build-up is totally missing and it cheapens the impact of these incidents despite their severity. The author just springs it on the reader and immediately proceeds to the next thing. It feels like this is done so for mere shock factor too rather than for the sake of the story.
The pacing of this story is something else. (Horrid) Things are happening in such rapid succession, the necessary build-up is totally missing and it cheapens the impact of these incidents despite their severity. The author just springs it on the reader and immediately proceeds to the next thing. It feels like this is done so for mere shock factor too rather than for the sake of the story.