I liked premise of the story but not how things unfolded. Feel like the mc doesnt reaction enough to Daniel's death and finding out the ml had some part in it. I think the mc should have went on a little psycho tirade and spiraled after learning about everything And in the heat the moment releaved his true identity to the ml. But I did like the twist of Daniel already being sick even tho it broke my heart But ml should've had a begging on his knees arc 10 chapters long
I liked premise of the story but not how things unfolded.
Feel like the mc doesnt reaction enough to Daniel's death and finding out the ml had some part in it.
I think the mc should have went on a little psycho tirade and spiraled after learning about everything
And in the heat the moment releaved his true identity to the ml.
But I did like the twist of Daniel already being sick even tho it broke my heart
But ml should've had a begging on his knees arc 10 chapters long