Don't get me wrong, I like it but I don't like how most of the stuff that supposedly happened was told instead of shown. This is true in most BLs and it's a bit frustrating
1. I understand how Hyungdo fell for Lee Gyung. Someone who's deprived of love and affection will cling to anybody who'll show them an ounce of warmth.
What I don't like is it wasn't shown how Lee Gyung fell for Hyungdo. He was introduced as someone who's manipulative, cold, and not capable of loving. All he did with Hyungdo was fucked him. So when did he fell? There were a couple of internal monolog but I didn't like how there wasn't a moment shown in the story where we could clearly see he fell for him. All of a sudden he loves him?
2. We know Hyungdo went through shit for the past 2 and half years. But again, we only know because it was mentioned, NOT shown. It was hard for me to sympathize with him. It has hard to despise that weirdo with the ugly bangs. I mean I hate him for raping Hyungdo, but I know we should despise him for pimping Hyungdo, but we didn't get to see that.
3. We know Lee Gyung hut rock bottom as well. I wish we get to see more of him rebuilding his power, him looking and longing for Hyungdo, realizing he love and misses him. I really don't get what happened to him after he lost the club and rebuilt his life. Like, is he powerful again? Doesn't seem like it. Idk i don't like it. I don't like how we are force to accept that he's back, he's ok, don't ask questions what happened and just accept it.
If the author cut back the sex stuff and focus more on the plot, this could have been waaays better.
Don't get me wrong, I like it but I don't like how most of the stuff that supposedly happened was told instead of shown. This is true in most BLs and it's a bit frustrating
1. I understand how Hyungdo fell for Lee Gyung. Someone who's deprived of love and affection will cling to anybody who'll show them an ounce of warmth.
What I don't like is it wasn't shown how Lee Gyung fell for Hyungdo. He was introduced as someone who's manipulative, cold, and not capable of loving. All he did with Hyungdo was fucked him. So when did he fell? There were a couple of internal monolog but I didn't like how there wasn't a moment shown in the story where we could clearly see he fell for him. All of a sudden he loves him?
2. We know Hyungdo went through shit for the past 2 and half years. But again, we only know because it was mentioned, NOT shown. It was hard for me to sympathize with him. It has hard to despise that weirdo with the ugly bangs. I mean I hate him for raping Hyungdo, but I know we should despise him for pimping Hyungdo, but we didn't get to see that.
3. We know Lee Gyung hut rock bottom as well. I wish we get to see more of him rebuilding his power, him looking and longing for Hyungdo, realizing he love and misses him. I really don't get what happened to him after he lost the club and rebuilt his life. Like, is he powerful again? Doesn't seem like it. Idk i don't like it. I don't like how we are force to accept that he's back, he's ok, don't ask questions what happened and just accept it.
If the author cut back the sex stuff and focus more on the plot, this could have been waaays better.