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Bad story telling

Blackychi October 8, 2026 7:33 am

The story is all over the place. The storytelling is terrible! There are no smooth transitions. something suddenly happens, then in the next panel, it’s already resolved. It feels so disjointed and rushed..
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I guess the artist wasn’t sober when they made this manhwa..
The art is good. But the story? You’d better not wasting your time reading this..

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