This story is like a really badly written 1D fanfic made by a 13 yr old whose first language isn’t english. ( I mean I would eat it up but this genuinely made my blood boil) ML sucks ass first of all. The writer tried to make kind of like toxic obsessive story with a chad ML but the he just comes off as a creep. Imagine if he wasn’t conventionally attractive? The MC sucks too, I hate characters who say that they will do one thing but end up doing the opposite. why are they thinking from their balls? Just jerk off and call it a day. The story could have taken so many turns but all of them lead to one - “I gots to try the dough”
This story is like a really badly written 1D fanfic made by a 13 yr old whose first language isn’t english. ( I mean I would eat it up but this genuinely made my blood boil)
ML sucks ass first of all. The writer tried to make kind of like toxic obsessive story with a chad ML but the he just comes off as a creep. Imagine if he wasn’t conventionally attractive? The MC sucks too, I hate characters who say that they will do one thing but end up doing the opposite.
why are they thinking from their balls? Just jerk off and call it a day. The story could have taken so many turns but all of them lead to one - “I gots to try the dough”