The one thing i like about this is she doesn't know everything about the novel (like he has so many persona) .. And not everyrhing goes right for her lol... Its too simple if everyrhing will always end well for the FL like other stories, it becomes boring.. So I think this story is fine, slow and clumsy.... The development is a bit awkward and stiff but its cute.. Love the art hope it improves more too
The one thing i like about this is she doesn't know everything about the novel (like he has so many persona) .. And not everyrhing goes right for her lol... Its too simple if everyrhing will always end well for the FL like other stories, it becomes boring.. So I think this story is fine, slow and clumsy.... The development is a bit awkward and stiff but its cute.. Love the art hope it improves more too