I don't know if it's just me but, the art looks so empty? Like it's as if this is the first draft... and every chapter feel so short and unsatisfying, like im not saying as in wanting to know the story but in way like, the formatting of the panels feels so mf huge taking up so much space but there's barely any story progression.... like I'm genuinely just looking at a picturebook
I don't know if it's just me but, the art looks so empty? Like it's as if this is the first draft... and every chapter feel so short and unsatisfying, like im not saying as in wanting to know the story but in way like, the formatting of the panels feels so mf huge taking up so much space but there's barely any story progression.... like I'm genuinely just looking at a picturebook