the perspective can be improved because sometimes they look the same height, sometimes one person become taller and vice versa.
but story wise I think it's perfect? i am generally prefer faster pace and the story is it. mc still hasn't recovered his full memory but we readers get a glimpse of past conspiracy (and tbh it's guessable if you're familiar with guide verse).
it's def far better than this BL webtoon i read where everyone remember but author forced it so much to be mystery so no one said anything even after 50+ chapters and instead new problem come up... it's so frustrating.
for 20-ish chapter we got a lot of development here and mc already regained part of his memory, we saw a glimpse of the past to guess the conspiracy and even saw possibly the biggest villain. we also can guess MC and ML prior dynamic... everything unraveled quite naturally. idk people who complain may be more used to stuff being fed to them? did they wish for even more fast paced story? this one is already quite fast paced enough and stay focused on one problem to unravel: a big conspiracy that seemingly made mc as scapegoat to the point he wanted to die, this also after being abused a lot by his guild until he met ml in the past. mc wanted to die so much he probably let an accident happened to him then ml saved him. how is this not easy to understand beyond me
wow it's pretty good.
the perspective can be improved because sometimes they look the same height, sometimes one person become taller and vice versa.
but story wise I think it's perfect? i am generally prefer faster pace and the story is it. mc still hasn't recovered his full memory but we readers get a glimpse of past conspiracy (and tbh it's guessable if you're familiar with guide verse).
it's def far better than this BL webtoon i read where everyone remember but author forced it so much to be mystery so no one said anything even after 50+ chapters and instead new problem come up... it's so frustrating.
for 20-ish chapter we got a lot of development here and mc already regained part of his memory, we saw a glimpse of the past to guess the conspiracy and even saw possibly the biggest villain. we also can guess MC and ML prior dynamic... everything unraveled quite naturally. idk people who complain may be more used to stuff being fed to them? did they wish for even more fast paced story? this one is already quite fast paced enough and stay focused on one problem to unravel: a big conspiracy that seemingly made mc as scapegoat to the point he wanted to die, this also after being abused a lot by his guild until he met ml in the past. mc wanted to die so much he probably let an accident happened to him then ml saved him. how is this not easy to understand beyond me