the concept of open to enjoy smut instead have to sit up and read the story cus what the hell
the sex is hot but the plot is too confusing for oneshot story like whats the point of making 2ver of them when at the end of rhe day they r still same face? and we didnt even get to see the actual love interested fucking too? i understand they tryna make something but its not as great i thought we gonna get the actual love interested/couple instead of fuckbuddy thingy like its gonna be surprised that they used to one nightstand at the end. i know one short story it doesn't have to make sense for ending but it doesn't mean u can js put wtvwtv in. it js more like author want to do actor x rock so i dont understand whats the Point of making the relationship confusing when ure not even gonna make scene where they're finally tgt.what do i expect from oneshot sighsigh the cover/art look promising b4 yall jump me theres lot of oneshot that smuty but still good better ending/plot. (is the weird relationship suppose to make the story longer?)
imo the relationship graph thingy is js trash it doesn't explain everything/the actual thingy one who's fucking with actor till is his manager ivan who got a match with him but he js dress up as someone else so till couldnt recognise him even if its control c control v,from the story we can tell? that both of the ivan wouldnt accept doing with someone else even if identical face and from his personality that clingy too and rock ivan seems like he doesn't know actor till also the overprotective and sus thing that ivan do at the end lead to no cheating on love interested
author want to make thing unique for one shot but the concept doesn't fit one short story the lack of "thought" of ivan scene/the weird relationship but in the end it doesn't explain anything at all
the concept of open to enjoy smut instead have to sit up and read the story cus what the hell
the sex is hot but the plot is too confusing for oneshot story like whats the point of making 2ver of them when at the end of rhe day they r still same face? and we didnt even get to see the actual love interested fucking too? i understand they tryna make something but its not as great i thought we gonna get the actual love interested/couple instead of fuckbuddy thingy like its gonna be surprised that they used to one nightstand at the end. i know one short story it doesn't have to make sense for ending but it doesn't mean u can js put wtvwtv in. it js more like author want to do actor x rock so i dont understand whats the Point of making the relationship confusing when ure not even gonna make scene where they're finally tgt.what do i expect from oneshot sighsigh the cover/art look promising b4 yall jump me theres lot of oneshot that smuty but still good better ending/plot. (is the weird relationship suppose to make the story longer?)
imo the relationship graph thingy is js trash it doesn't explain everything/the actual thingy one who's fucking with actor till is his manager ivan who got a match with him but he js dress up as someone else so till couldnt recognise him even if its control c control v,from the story we can tell? that both of the ivan wouldnt accept doing with someone else even if identical face and from his personality that clingy too and rock ivan seems like he doesn't know actor till also the overprotective and sus thing that ivan do at the end lead to no cheating on love interested
author want to make thing unique for one shot but the concept doesn't fit one short story the lack of "thought" of ivan scene/the weird relationship but in the end it doesn't explain anything at all