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It was like unnecessarily 3 times longer. I read this and only the rescue part felt short. Tho that is just my opinion, i know it was written longer..
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It was like unnecessarily 3 times longer. I read this and only the rescue part felt short. Tho that is just my opinion, i know it was written longer..
If i remember correctly it was more dramatic than this....the reveal, chase looking go for pate... It all was more dramatic....hmm maybe i am remembering wrong since i just came come from binge reading a novel with 1000+ chaps (taking a break) its a action so maybe it my brain is still on it’s hyper active with Details mode （￣へ￣）