riddled with plot holes. some characters and their motivations stood out to me (yeowon, seoha.) yeowon and yujeong's arc really got to me.
miho is a really compelling character, but jinhwa is very, very rough; she could definitely be more fleshed out.
i feel like i could compare miho/jinhwa/the noblewoman's whole deal with inuyasha. i really do hope jinhwa finds herself and establishes herself as a character who can actually be compelling instead of a character who always conveniently gets out of whatever pickle she's in. i know she has a lot of power, but we could see more of her struggles with it. while i want to root for them because the potential is there, i can't lie: it really, REALLY reads like miho's not over her ex. the conclusion of her falling in love with jinhwa came too suddenly, even though i knew we were on the way there. a lot more development and exposition between them would have helped a lot. now their relationship falls flat if you compare it to miho's and the noblewoman's.
likeeee fuckkk. we saw how inuyasha slowly, genuinely fell in love with kagome, even after his great love with kikyo. i wish miho and jinhwa would have the same.
riddled with plot holes. some characters and their motivations stood out to me (yeowon, seoha.) yeowon and yujeong's arc really got to me.
miho is a really compelling character, but jinhwa is very, very rough; she could definitely be more fleshed out.
i feel like i could compare miho/jinhwa/the noblewoman's whole deal with inuyasha. i really do hope jinhwa finds herself and establishes herself as a character who can actually be compelling instead of a character who always conveniently gets out of whatever pickle she's in. i know she has a lot of power, but we could see more of her struggles with it. while i want to root for them because the potential is there, i can't lie: it really, REALLY reads like miho's not over her ex. the conclusion of her falling in love with jinhwa came too suddenly, even though i knew we were on the way there. a lot more development and exposition between them would have helped a lot. now their relationship falls flat if you compare it to miho's and the noblewoman's.
likeeee fuckkk. we saw how inuyasha slowly, genuinely fell in love with kagome, even after his great love with kikyo. i wish miho and jinhwa would have the same.