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Unique plot, shitty storytelling

Melobear October 13, 2026 1:09 pm

The plot is unique for a BL but damn the storytelling is ass lmao. Took me 20 chapters to get a general understanding of things, got attached to specific characters and now the focus of the story is on someone else?? Idk I can't really get into it anymore and don't think I'll finish this. Shame because it was geniunely really interesting. But storytelling is all over the place. (dropping at ch 38).

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