Dear author, (yeah yeah some bitches are gonna yap about me going off in "pirated" site, so I am telling this first, SUCK IT UP) Ahem so Dear author, if you don't have it in you to merge different genres PROPERLY, don't do it PLEASE. (Entirely my POV though, maybe others liked it, but I didn't.) First gangbang/ group/ fuck everyone type of Pornhwa and ROMANCE don't mix together. Like AT ALL. What do you want us to do? Fap, or swoon, or be disgusted? Cause these three emotions sure can't be felt together. And you even tried to make this like shounen thing, which you COULDN'T, seriously fucked up. You didn't even try. I am so angry cause I was horny and this was promoted as pornhwa so I started it. Non con thing don't bother me when I am at that state, at least since the genre is termed as "Ahego", so first, second and third sex scenes? Good. Art? Delicious. But then out of nowhere there is a love interest?? I thought okay, so maybe romance genre focused. But then comes the most digusting scene which made me almost barf (the goblin thing, very very very *100000000 disgusting). I know you said you are proud to finish this, but this is not how its done. You have talent, sure. the art? Good. Some smut scenes? delicious? characters? Done well. But despite having talent, you fucked this up. It could have been so many better with just shounen pornhwa. I DIDN'T LIKE IT. Upto the first three sex scenes? 9/10, then dropped to 0.00000000000001/10.
Dear author, (yeah yeah some bitches are gonna yap about me going off in "pirated" site, so I am telling this first, SUCK IT UP)
Ahem so Dear author, if you don't have it in you to merge different genres PROPERLY, don't do it PLEASE. (Entirely my POV though, maybe others liked it, but I didn't.)
First gangbang/ group/ fuck everyone type of Pornhwa and ROMANCE don't mix together. Like AT ALL.
What do you want us to do? Fap, or swoon, or be disgusted? Cause these three emotions sure can't be felt together.
And you even tried to make this like shounen thing, which you COULDN'T, seriously fucked up. You didn't even try.
I am so angry cause I was horny and this was promoted as pornhwa so I started it. Non con thing don't bother me when I am at that state, at least since the genre is termed as "Ahego", so first, second and third sex scenes? Good. Art? Delicious.
But then out of nowhere there is a love interest?? I thought okay, so maybe romance genre focused. But then comes the most digusting scene which made me almost barf (the goblin thing, very very very *100000000 disgusting).
I know you said you are proud to finish this, but this is not how its done.
You have talent, sure. the art? Good. Some smut scenes? delicious? characters? Done well. But despite having talent, you fucked this up. It could have been so many better with just shounen pornhwa.
I DIDN'T LIKE IT.
Upto the first three sex scenes? 9/10, then dropped to 0.00000000000001/10.