It was going so good until it wasn't. It felt like the author had multiple spontaneous great ideas for the plot, started the execution of it and gave up midway. The end of each scene after the MC first 3 problems was so rushed and not given enough time to simmer. So bummed I wasted time on it as it had so much potential
It was going so good until it wasn't. It felt like the author had multiple spontaneous great ideas for the plot, started the execution of it and gave up midway. The end of each scene after the MC first 3 problems was so rushed and not given enough time to simmer. So bummed I wasted time on it as it had so much potential