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This is kinda trivial, but I don't think it's right to called 1-2 years only age differences as age gap, basically they're same generation (this is Lowkey bugging me cause during my time in college all my classmates are 1-2 years older so called it age gap feels weird).
this story is rather awkward for me. i really like the “swap bodies” concept, i’ve read a story b4 with the same concept without the ridiculous ass age gap. i’d probably wouldn’t say too much about it if it was “mason saved him once and now he forever holds that memory with him” but mason just kept appearing back into his life like oh no im not hungry. i dropped at chapter 43, i really wanted to get through so i could write a full analysis but this is kinda ridiculous. didn’t even try to make it a 1-2 year gap, it’s like a whole 10(?) years, im good bro