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Could've been better, could've been worse

AnnoyingNea October 14, 2026 9:30 am

Good idea, bad execution imo. Everything was a bit too fast and rushed. I sometimes felt like between chapters were 2 chapters or so missing. They didn't give time for things to develop or reveal themselves. Considering it's 50 chapters, I feel like it should've been like 70 minimum instead.
Because of this, I checked for a novel and it seems like that has 113 main story chapters and some side story chapters, for a total of 152. Might give it a try later to see if the pacing is better there

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