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This better not

Fluffy P October 15, 2026 6:06 am

Not be some Yaoi slop. ‘Cause lowkey this story boring me out so far. Sex scenes aside. Dawn of the dragons made the sex scenes far more enjoyable. But off the bat, bros hitting him from the back ‘cause of mind control powers. Author gotta be on some next level boredom bullshit with this sloppy plot.

Only reading this ‘cause I wanna see where the author takes this story, but I’m hella boooorreddxdd.
This typa mind control plot ain’t nothing new but I really wanna see what this entity is before I drop this shit.

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    Here4TheFun October 15, 2026 7:20 am

    Youre acting like the top in DOTD didn't go into tentacle heat and fuck the bottom in like the 3rd chapter like idk either drop it or stop complaining

    Fluffy P October 15, 2026 7:43 am
    Youre acting like the top in DOTD didn't go into tentacle heat and fuck the bottom in like the 3rd chapter like idk either drop it or stop complaining Here4TheFun

    Oh, I will complain thank you very much for your unwanted opinion on my opinion. You wastin your own time tryna argue with people who Clearly don’t gaf whether this story’s plott is good or ass.

    The difference with this and DOTD is the fact that it’s NOT FUCKING BORING.

    Here4TheFun October 15, 2026 1:15 pm
    Oh, I will complain thank you very much for your unwanted opinion on my opinion. You wastin your own time tryna argue with people who Clearly don’t gaf whether this story’s plott is good or ass.The differen... Fluffy P

    And you busy wasting your time clearly reading shit you have no interest in and then boohooing about it in the comments like someones supposed to gaf like pack it up dummy