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This was really such a good read!! A couple points I’d like to make: - MC looks like T...

Lamrzz October 17, 2026 4:57 am

This was really such a good read!!
A couple points I’d like to make:

- MC looks like Tennese from amber alert but in a different font

- in ch1 they said he was 33 now then it said “one year ago” and he’s telling ML he’s 30???

- And in chapter 37 he said the doctor told them “they could go back to normal activities rn” when they were about to fuck it’s been 3 years??? The doctor just told them it’s ok??? You’re telling me they haven’t fucked once since? -.-

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    ARandomTime October 17, 2026 5:13 am

    This is a flashback, from right after they returned from the hospital. Im the previous chapter - after the time jump - the orphanage was already established and with kids. Here they were only just opening it

    Lamrzz October 17, 2026 7:17 am
    This is a flashback, from right after they returned from the hospital. Im the previous chapter - after the time jump - the orphanage was already established and with kids. Here they were only just opening it ARandomTime

    Oh!!! You’re right thank you!!
    And the age thing?? Was that just a mistake or maybe a mistranslation?