This was really such a good read!! A couple points I’d like to make:
- MC looks like Tennese from amber alert but in a different font
- in ch1 they said he was 33 now then it said “one year ago” and he’s telling ML he’s 30???
- And in chapter 37 he said the doctor told them “they could go back to normal activities rn” when they were about to fuck it’s been 3 years??? The doctor just told them it’s ok??? You’re telling me they haven’t fucked once since? -.-
This is a flashback, from right after they returned from the hospital. Im the previous chapter - after the time jump - the orphanage was already established and with kids. Here they were only just opening it
This is a flashback, from right after they returned from the hospital. Im the previous chapter - after the time jump - the orphanage was already established and with kids. Here they were only just opening it ARandomTime
Oh!!! You’re right thank you!! And the age thing?? Was that just a mistake or maybe a mistranslation?
This was really such a good read!!
A couple points I’d like to make:
- MC looks like Tennese from amber alert but in a different font
- in ch1 they said he was 33 now then it said “one year ago” and he’s telling ML he’s 30???
- And in chapter 37 he said the doctor told them “they could go back to normal activities rn” when they were about to fuck it’s been 3 years??? The doctor just told them it’s ok??? You’re telling me they haven’t fucked once since? -.-