Spoilers ahead and a lot of my opinions. . . This is a pretty good romcom IMO, it just has a few flaws. The horribly written characters (the kids, the eccentric love interests and such, the villain) have a justification (somewhat) and the plot is just what you'd expect for a typical isekai, it's just a tad bit difficult to understand what is going where sometimes.
Although they have a reason for the characters being the way they are (MC's sister's fantastic world) I find it to be a little too much at some points, and Hyeol is THE prime example. It's so horrible it's funny. 6 year olds, even if they had to grow up faster, just do not act like THAT. I'd be a little more understanding if he was like, 8 or 9—gradeschool, not pre-school.
The sudden 180° of the OG villains is a cliché that I personally liked in this story. MC isn't so trusting too, he's dense tho that pmo. The writing of the "true" villain, Yihan just feels a little too lackluster for me? It just feels rushed at the end, and I didn't quite grasp how the husband died (might just be because I read to fast).
Something that got lost along the way was the A/B/O setting. I know this is kid-safe kind of manhwa, but it had little to no significance in the latter parts.
Another thing is the timeframe of the whole thing. It all happened in ONE MONTH. you mean to tell me that only a month has passed from them meeting? No wonder everything feels so fast paced. It gives a good justification for the short term memory loss though, a lot of manhwas fail to acknowledge the fact that losing YEARS of memories happens on extremely rare occasions and requires extreme cases for it to happen. Alas, in the end, this is omly fiction and I'm talking to a brick wall.
In the end, they're all happy, I'm happy, and I want side-stories because this is a fun read.
Spoilers ahead and a lot of my opinions.
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This is a pretty good romcom IMO, it just has a few flaws. The horribly written characters (the kids, the eccentric love interests and such, the villain) have a justification (somewhat) and the plot is just what you'd expect for a typical isekai, it's just a tad bit difficult to understand what is going where sometimes.
Although they have a reason for the characters being the way they are (MC's sister's fantastic world) I find it to be a little too much at some points, and Hyeol is THE prime example. It's so horrible it's funny. 6 year olds, even if they had to grow up faster, just do not act like THAT. I'd be a little more understanding if he was like, 8 or 9—gradeschool, not pre-school.
The sudden 180° of the OG villains is a cliché that I personally liked in this story. MC isn't so trusting too, he's dense tho that pmo. The writing of the "true" villain, Yihan just feels a little too lackluster for me? It just feels rushed at the end, and I didn't quite grasp how the husband died (might just be because I read to fast).
Something that got lost along the way was the A/B/O setting. I know this is kid-safe kind of manhwa, but it had little to no significance in the latter parts.
Another thing is the timeframe of the whole thing. It all happened in ONE MONTH. you mean to tell me that only a month has passed from them meeting? No wonder everything feels so fast paced. It gives a good justification for the short term memory loss though, a lot of manhwas fail to acknowledge the fact that losing YEARS of memories happens on extremely rare occasions and requires extreme cases for it to happen. Alas, in the end, this is omly fiction and I'm talking to a brick wall.
In the end, they're all happy, I'm happy, and I want side-stories because this is a fun read.