ok so the scenario itself is awesome! but......the pacing is just god-awful! the story is bouncing around from one scene to the next without any explanations! Not to mention all the flashback scenes just snuck in on certain chapters. also, when the hell did the doctor say he hated guides? like, where was this ever a factor? are there chapters missing or is this just how its written? or when the doctor apologized to the MC about the harsh conversation they had in earlier chapters? where was this part?! And just now, the MC and ML were just at the physical fitness MMA fighting arena, they are in the bathroom, ML leaves and then there is a small convo with the doc about hating guides and then suddenly they are at a department store and somehow the ONI appeared. like, WTAF?!
ok so the scenario itself is awesome! but......the pacing is just god-awful! the story is bouncing around from one scene to the next without any explanations! Not to mention all the flashback scenes just snuck in on certain chapters. also, when the hell did the doctor say he hated guides? like, where was this ever a factor? are there chapters missing or is this just how its written? or when the doctor apologized to the MC about the harsh conversation they had in earlier chapters? where was this part?! And just now, the MC and ML were just at the physical fitness MMA fighting arena, they are in the bathroom, ML leaves and then there is a small convo with the doc about hating guides and then suddenly they are at a department store and somehow the ONI appeared. like, WTAF?!