Reading this, I feel like I’ve traveled back in time and am reading a Wattpad story: "I’m just an ordinary girl," "a tall, incredibly handsome brunette," "childhood trauma."
It’s not bad, but it’s very "shallow" for me. There are certain events—mere "checkpoints"—but I don’t see any logic behind the characters' actions, and everything I see feels like something I’ve already encountered in thousands of other stories.
Reading this, I feel like I’ve traveled back in time and am reading a Wattpad story: "I’m just an ordinary girl," "a tall, incredibly handsome brunette," "childhood trauma."
It’s not bad, but it’s very "shallow" for me. There are certain events—mere "checkpoints"—but I don’t see any logic behind the characters' actions, and everything I see feels like something I’ve already encountered in thousands of other stories.