ok so i love the story and i stopped around raviel arc before cause i just stopped reading things back then now i've seen it's back and so here i am re reading it (i'm at ch 150) i'll start by saying that i really love this story, the mc and everything but it's palpable that sometimes the scenes are a bit too much and don't make really sense, like people just disappear and you're like "where tf are the others while their two are filming?" also, even though i like raviel i just don't get how they fell in love etc, like I get it but isn't that a little too much? t.t and idk i got really confused next with the constellation assassin thing and we don't even have tons of internal dialogs between mc and sword emperor and shiny and.. idk it seems like for the author is too much I still like it obv and everything is cute and all but i'd like to be more.. taken care of? like when writing a scene thinking tf the others are doing or at least where they are.. idk just my crashout btw c.c
ok so i love the story and i stopped around raviel arc before cause i just stopped reading things back then
now i've seen it's back and so here i am re reading it (i'm at ch 150)
i'll start by saying that i really love this story, the mc and everything but it's palpable that sometimes the scenes are a bit too much and don't make really sense, like people just disappear and you're like "where tf are the others while their two are filming?" also, even though i like raviel i just don't get how they fell in love etc, like I get it but isn't that a little too much? t.t and idk i got really confused next with the constellation assassin thing and we don't even have tons of internal dialogs between mc and sword emperor and shiny and.. idk
it seems like for the author is too much
I still like it obv and everything is cute and all but i'd like to be more.. taken care of? like when writing a scene thinking tf the others are doing or at least where they are.. idk
just my crashout btw c.c