The bottom drives me crazy: he has no rational intelligence, no emotional regulation, no empathy, its always just about him—absolutely nothing going for him, aside from his face and his hole. As for the top, he’s decent enough, but his character development comes out of nowhere; it’s so implausible that I actually laughed, the guy does a complete 180 and suddenly starts acting like the childhood best friend… And, naturally, NOW the bottom starts falling for this sweet, kind-hearted type. Ugh, I can’t stand him. Then there are the classic tropes, like fainting—just lazy writing used to avoid crafting a coherent, sensible story. It’s really off-putting. But the smut is good and it has baby trop so yeah, im guilty to give it 3/5
The bottom drives me crazy: he has no rational intelligence, no emotional regulation, no empathy, its always just about him—absolutely nothing going for him, aside from his face and his hole. As for the top, he’s decent enough, but his character development comes out of nowhere; it’s so implausible that I actually laughed, the guy does a complete 180 and suddenly starts acting like the childhood best friend… And, naturally, NOW the bottom starts falling for this sweet, kind-hearted type. Ugh, I can’t stand him. Then there are the classic tropes, like fainting—just lazy writing used to avoid crafting a coherent, sensible story. It’s really off-putting. But the smut is good and it has baby trop so yeah, im guilty to give it 3/5