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idk why this story just felt like a wattpad novel lol. something about it felt disjointed ...

October 19, 2026 5:12 pm

idk why this story just felt like a wattpad novel lol. something about it felt disjointed and i feel like i never bonded with any of the characters. the seme for some reason also rubs me the wrong way? it feels like theres a conscious attempt to display him as a green flag, communicative, caring dude but theres a mismatch between language, emotional delivery from the visuals and just overall vibe. idk if its just me.

overall im not sure if this series is a 9+ rating at all but thats just my two cents.

Responses
    dat_ass October 19, 2026 8:18 pm

    No I second this.
    The story felt very childish (idk if right word) to me.
    The author desperately tried to make Nick a green flag but I kept feeling a weird vibe from him.