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Almost didn’t pick up bc of the comments. Glad I finished it!

doomedyaoi October 21, 2026 1:12 am

A lot of miscommunication, but it was a cute (?) read. It had an actual plot, and the progression of the couple’s relationship (with the seme doing a lot of the heavy lifting) was done well.

I’ve seen a lot of complaints about the seme being too pushy, and at first, I do agree. However, as their relationship progressed, I think he realized he needed to “encourage” the uke to experience new things and learn to stand up for himself, while also teaching him what being in a partnership means. This all comes into play towards the end.

The smut was good, too. The uke likes it rough lol, so idk why people are acting as if he didn’t. I was surprised that the seme was willing to go to prison over his coercive behavior toward the uke.

If you don’t mind a crybaby pairing that has a hard time communicating, then go for it!

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