The characters in this Manhwa were awfully written. When you think you know where the plot is going, surprise! You actually don't. I honestly don't know what the author was smoking when he wrote this book, I need that shit urgently. Not so that I can write trash like this, but because I need something that would push me to keep going despite me seeing a literal shit fire in front of me. I mean, I commend the author for not putting in a piss kink, because it seems like almost every author had to put at least one thing in their books. Either it's rape, shit plot, piss kinks, the top treating the bottom like absolute garbage, and the bottom physically abusing the top by hitting them when they don't get their way or get angry. What saddens me is that I can list even more, it's alot, but I'll keep it a minimum for now. The top is a raging narcissist, and he knows it. The bottom was heavily obsessed with him to the point of drinking his semen straight from the condom packet, and when the top changed his secondary gender and treated him like he treated most of the people he slept with, the bottom got upset about it and pushed him away. He absolutely hates his guts despite loving him that much. I honestly thought one of them was going to die at the end of the book, because they both have good reasons to. The top lost his sanity and had somewhat of an ego death when the one that's been obsessed with him all this time said he doesn't want him. Which made him think about something other than himself, and he went through multiple breakdowns that when he met him, he tied him up in a bunker, and tried to drug and impregnate him. Obviously, even if things started going well from then, I'm sure he wouldn't have forgiven him too easily and would want to kill him. The bottom has gone through so much in his hands that he can't even have a normal wet dream without it turning to shit because he knows the top is batshit crazy, and will make his life a living hell despite him being a considerate partner that enjoys eating him out. He acknowledges that he hates his fucking guts but also loves him, and he said so, when they talked in the bunker, obviously he wouldn't be able to trust him even again. He shouldn't have been able to continue having a relationship with him. He legit ran away from him for his own survival, for what? For revenge? Fuck that. The thought of even being next to him suffocates him. He should've killed him or stabbed him with a knife the moment they left that bunker, I was expecting it even. But he didn't. So he's definitely crazy too. Maybe he developed Stockholm syndrome from being at his mercy all that time. If this story taught me anything, it's that I should get my bag up fr, so that shit like this won't happen to me because of how poor I am. Fuck that. Fuck this shitty ass Manhwa, fuck the characters, and fuck the shitty author for trying to rejuvenate him before the ending of the book, it didn't help, it made the story ten times worse. A word of advice for the author, even though they're not going to see it anyways lol. Try to make it so that the people undergoing the sex change actually do it willingly. At least it'll remove the rape aspect from it. It's not everyday that you see a story that has plot like this. Even if the story includes genderbending, it's full a change. Nothing like this, so you have something good going on, and you seem to know alot about female anatomy and at least your characters love pussy as much as they say they would so lean into that more. And you'll make the story ten times better I'm sure of it. I'm tired of writing so that's all folks.
The characters in this Manhwa were awfully written. When you think you know where the plot is going, surprise! You actually don't. I honestly don't know what the author was smoking when he wrote this book, I need that shit urgently. Not so that I can write trash like this, but because I need something that would push me to keep going despite me seeing a literal shit fire in front of me. I mean, I commend the author for not putting in a piss kink, because it seems like almost every author had to put at least one thing in their books. Either it's rape, shit plot, piss kinks, the top treating the bottom like absolute garbage, and the bottom physically abusing the top by hitting them when they don't get their way or get angry. What saddens me is that I can list even more, it's alot, but I'll keep it a minimum for now. The top is a raging narcissist, and he knows it. The bottom was heavily obsessed with him to the point of drinking his semen straight from the condom packet, and when the top changed his secondary gender and treated him like he treated most of the people he slept with, the bottom got upset about it and pushed him away. He absolutely hates his guts despite loving him that much. I honestly thought one of them was going to die at the end of the book, because they both have good reasons to. The top lost his sanity and had somewhat of an ego death when the one that's been obsessed with him all this time said he doesn't want him. Which made him think about something other than himself, and he went through multiple breakdowns that when he met him, he tied him up in a bunker, and tried to drug and impregnate him. Obviously, even if things started going well from then, I'm sure he wouldn't have forgiven him too easily and would want to kill him. The bottom has gone through so much in his hands that he can't even have a normal wet dream without it turning to shit because he knows the top is batshit crazy, and will make his life a living hell despite him being a considerate partner that enjoys eating him out. He acknowledges that he hates his fucking guts but also loves him, and he said so, when they talked in the bunker, obviously he wouldn't be able to trust him even again. He shouldn't have been able to continue having a relationship with him. He legit ran away from him for his own survival, for what? For revenge? Fuck that. The thought of even being next to him suffocates him. He should've killed him or stabbed him with a knife the moment they left that bunker, I was expecting it even. But he didn't. So he's definitely crazy too. Maybe he developed Stockholm syndrome from being at his mercy all that time. If this story taught me anything, it's that I should get my bag up fr, so that shit like this won't happen to me because of how poor I am. Fuck that. Fuck this shitty ass Manhwa, fuck the characters, and fuck the shitty author for trying to rejuvenate him before the ending of the book, it didn't help, it made the story ten times worse. A word of advice for the author, even though they're not going to see it anyways lol. Try to make it so that the people undergoing the sex change actually do it willingly. At least it'll remove the rape aspect from it. It's not everyday that you see a story that has plot like this. Even if the story includes genderbending, it's full a change. Nothing like this, so you have something good going on, and you seem to know alot about female anatomy and at least your characters love pussy as much as they say they would so lean into that more. And you'll make the story ten times better I'm sure of it. I'm tired of writing so that's all folks.