it wasn't nearly as smutty as I thought it would be in the beginning, very cute and the art is beautiful. However it's full of plot holes like the writer just made shit up along the way. ***spoilers***
the fact that's it's short also doesn't help fix the mistakes made along the way, wdym the duchess isn't dead. they talk about her like she's dead from the very beginning. Also the ML has pink hair and pink fur so they bully him but the viscount (his father?) has white hair and pinkish fur but he's okay? the misunderstandings between them are also very odd, you think she only likes your body so you? run? uh? I think her reaction to that was more than normal, if someone avoids you well nothing much you can do about it... what did she have to apologize for? oh sorry btw I just fell for you? uh? when?? so much time given to the bullying and avoidant behavior and zero time for them to fall in love tbh. anyway lots of weird stuff but it's fine if you don't think much about it I would have like to know more about their powers and about Jane and the two brothers, as well as the snake's story but I don't think the writer is capable of complex storytelling so it's probably better not to know.
it wasn't nearly as smutty as I thought it would be in the beginning, very cute and the art is beautiful. However it's full of plot holes like the writer just made shit up along the way.
***spoilers***
the fact that's it's short also doesn't help fix the mistakes made along the way, wdym the duchess isn't dead. they talk about her like she's dead from the very beginning. Also the ML has pink hair and pink fur so they bully him but the viscount (his father?) has white hair and pinkish fur but he's okay? the misunderstandings between them are also very odd, you think she only likes your body so you? run? uh? I think her reaction to that was more than normal, if someone avoids you well nothing much you can do about it... what did she have to apologize for? oh sorry btw I just fell for you? uh? when?? so much time given to the bullying and avoidant behavior and zero time for them to fall in love tbh.
anyway lots of weird stuff but it's fine if you don't think much about it
I would have like to know more about their powers and about Jane and the two brothers, as well as the snake's story but I don't think the writer is capable of complex storytelling so it's probably better not to know.