I think Hiyori and Rennosuke are super adorable but- the plot itself was kinda sub-par. The premise was interesting and really funny but we kinda rushed through everything which was really unfortunate. Even for a short story, I wish we could’ve a least focused on the yakuza aspect ((as far as Rennosuke wanting to liberate himself from that lifestyle)) and maybe some elaboration on how Rennosuke developed his crush on Hiyori?? Anyways I really wanted to see the development of their relationship and themselves as characters but we didn’t really get that. Plush the whole, Tsubaki part was kind of unnecessary especially because they just made up without every actually talking about the problem even though Rennosuke realized he was wrong
I think Hiyori and Rennosuke are super adorable but- the plot itself was kinda sub-par. The premise was interesting and really funny but we kinda rushed through everything which was really unfortunate. Even for a short story, I wish we could’ve a least focused on the yakuza aspect ((as far as Rennosuke wanting to liberate himself from that lifestyle)) and maybe some elaboration on how Rennosuke developed his crush on Hiyori?? Anyways I really wanted to see the development of their relationship and themselves as characters but we didn’t really get that. Plush the whole, Tsubaki part was kind of unnecessary especially because they just made up without every actually talking about the problem even though Rennosuke realized he was wrong