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The story’s pretty good but definitely has some shortcomings. I thought we were gonna ge...

Sapphire October 23, 2026 10:41 am

The story’s pretty good but definitely has some shortcomings. I thought we were gonna get more of Aster and Demian’s dynamics as a chaotic duo. Most of the side characters are sidelined to the max and there’s a bunch of mini plots that are partially formed, like training the white hair girl and the academy in general. And of course, the extreme body proportions for female characters that make the art feel inconsistent. The female characters have their own character designs at least, the professor looks really cool. Aster in general is also fun to read.

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