I read some of this a while ago, but read the entire thing now.
Overall I really enjoyed it as a concept. I think the art was gorgeous, and I enjoyed the main character.
That said, I've noticed a disappointing trend of stories having really good s1 and then a weaker s2. That also seems to be the case here. Nevermind it's almost half the length of s1, s2 sort of rushed some of the plot and and I was left with quite a few questions at the end.
I liked ML just fine, but I actually was more interested in the familial relations. I think her bond with her adopted brother was really sweet and you can really see how hurt he is by the OG protagonist's actions.
Plus her father being a victim of sexual assault, and that not getting totally glossed over, was something I found commendable. It always feel tacky when stories insert that into the plot and not treat it with the gravitas it should have, so I wanted to acknowledge that.
But ultimately there were really only 3 characters that story focuses on. MC, ML, and OG protagonist. Everyone else feels pretty secondary and just serves as plot devices-and that's fine. I just wished they were fleshed out more. I was honestly expecting certain characters to actually be from the real world as well, but I guess it was just the MC and ML.
I read some of this a while ago, but read the entire thing now.
Overall I really enjoyed it as a concept. I think the art was gorgeous, and I enjoyed the main character.
That said, I've noticed a disappointing trend of stories having really good s1 and then a weaker s2. That also seems to be the case here. Nevermind it's almost half the length of s1, s2 sort of rushed some of the plot and and I was left with quite a few questions at the end.
I liked ML just fine, but I actually was more interested in the familial relations. I think her bond with her adopted brother was really sweet and you can really see how hurt he is by the OG protagonist's actions.
Plus her father being a victim of sexual assault, and that not getting totally glossed over, was something I found commendable. It always feel tacky when stories insert that into the plot and not treat it with the gravitas it should have, so I wanted to acknowledge that.
But ultimately there were really only 3 characters that story focuses on. MC, ML, and OG protagonist. Everyone else feels pretty secondary and just serves as plot devices-and that's fine. I just wished they were fleshed out more. I was honestly expecting certain characters to actually be from the real world as well, but I guess it was just the MC and ML.
Anyways, it was an enjoyable read c: