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Also.. why add the sa in the first place. Doesn't seem necessary to the story and it happens SO often too. Ugh Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
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Also.. why add the sa in the first place. Doesn't seem necessary to the story and it happens SO often too. Ugh Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
Towards the end the story gets so damn frustrating.. the author also tries to make the brown haired guy seem like a good guy that is lost.. HE LITERALLY OMFG.. Drugged someone, attempted rape MULTIPLE times and A LOT MORE. Just wanting to be loved does not excuse that. NOTHING does.
Also they make the black haired guy blush and expressions like he's enjoying the sa (while clearly in his thoughts not) while the grey haired guy is made clear he's not enjoying it... Not saying someone couldn't react this way but it seems to be drawn that way on purpose since the grey haired guys reactions are drawn soooo different.
This author has something going on.. I read the other story they've written and um.. Yeah I don't think they have a good grasp on how relationships work.
I read this years back and rereading this... Yeah not gonna reread again Σ( ￣□￣||)