Author forgot what to do with the plot in the middle I think, because it's so rushed in the end... And some parts it was so chatty and so much talking and yelling... It felt like they were yelling in my ear. The idea was good but the execution was poor. This story would have done wonders if the author took a dark path with the plot instead of making it so comedy-ish... This was not a story for comedy, pure angst would have been good.
Author forgot what to do with the plot in the middle I think, because it's so rushed in the end... And some parts it was so chatty and so much talking and yelling... It felt like they were yelling in my ear. The idea was good but the execution was poor.
This story would have done wonders if the author took a dark path with the plot instead of making it so comedy-ish... This was not a story for comedy, pure angst would have been good.
3/5 for me