I read this because the initial plot was interesting, and it seemed like the story was flowing in a really cool direction. But it feels like either the flow got lazy or is just lacking. Like there’s zero depth in her feelings for Zachary and other relationships, why some things are possible/others not, etc. And now it feels like there’s going to be a looonnnngg arc of something that doesn’t positively impact the storyline/character growth.
I read this because the initial plot was interesting, and it seemed like the story was flowing in a really cool direction. But it feels like either the flow got lazy or is just lacking. Like there’s zero depth in her feelings for Zachary and other relationships, why some things are possible/others not, etc. And now it feels like there’s going to be a looonnnngg arc of something that doesn’t positively impact the storyline/character growth.