hmmm idk, is it too soon to say this when we only have 7 chapters so far? but—
hmmmm, i feel like some parts of the story are kinda similar to dotd... like, the premise is good, but the way things progress from one chapter to the next kinda puts me off a little. also, hufttt, the smut is too fast..
i kinda hope this story won't be as long as dotd, though... maybe 20–30 chapters would be enough.
hmmm idk, is it too soon to say this when we only have 7 chapters so far? but—
hmmmm, i feel like some parts of the story are kinda similar to dotd... like, the premise is good, but the way things progress from one chapter to the next kinda puts me off a little. also, hufttt, the smut is too fast..
i kinda hope this story won't be as long as dotd, though... maybe 20–30 chapters would be enough.