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LongJune October 27, 2026 10:30 pm

I really loved the first part. It wasn't anything grand or impressive, but I loved the relationship between the two sisters and they both attempted to rescue each other. The then quick side stories of the other character's perspective of the story was a fun insight.

Then the second part is... something. It's a total shift of tone, we dropthe sisters relationship, the pregnancy just kinda went away? (Unless this is supposed take place before pregnancy). While it isn't all bad, I miss the original reason I started reading. The sisters!!

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