1st is probably a 6.5/10. it was okay. i enjoyed how the beta was the top instead of an even stronger alpha (inserteyeroll) but the story felt not properly concluded. okay first things first, the tl was blurry and overall; not good. the plot seemed a bit ludicrous, esp with the taxi driver, but i guess it worked out? the sex was good, not top-tier or anything, but good esp if you're into bondage/whipping.
not great: the ending is very ambiguous. the chairman won't go looking for him but the top is still operating under the assumption that he's going to fight in the dog fights so the mc might be send there after his training is done? which would mean he dies obvi. the other thing is that the mc was running but ended at the same village so it was a loop? it's never clearly explained.
random thing: the ml explains that all the dogs are under his control, but the wild dogs who showup to attack humans are bloodied (so where did the blood come from). does this mean that he could have ordered the dogs to attack the mc to scare him? (idk abt this one)
note: the chapter goes from 1 to 3 and chapter 2 is somewhere in the later chapters (as an fyi)
2nd is 6.5/10.i will say that's it's not my preferred art style (which def impact my ratings) but moving on. the plot was fairly lackluster, but it's also only 5 chps, so it was never going to be amazing.
that one panel of the ml sucking the mc's nipples is so ridiculous (in a good way). and the times where he punched the mc was more of a new concept that i hadn't seem before (so yay)
ending: so confused again (like wtf, are these all supposed to be oe?). okay, so the end of ch4 shows that he's the 'toilet' but the start of ch5 shows that he's the boss' puppy. so is it a 'puppy' by morning and evening, toilet by afternoon situation?
actual ending: so the ending shows that the ml is smiling in a 'not going to happen' way, where they would never return to normal, but it's not clearly shown. the mc has his hands on the collar/chain that's placed near the ml's neck, maybe implying that he'll strangle him? or that it symbolizes how he's now the one in control again? bro idk.
random: are 1 + 2 connected since they both mention dog fights?
3rd is 9/10 and THE BEST of the 4. alright, in the very beginning, i was hoping it was freak4freak then he mentioned 'brother' (rip), then it was kind of freak4freak since they were both into the incest(??). the wedding dress in the beginning/end was def my favorite scene.
at the end of chp8, the ml confesses which is direct proof that he's in love with the mc, which is what the mc wanted to wear, but he just ignored the ml? he didn't acknowledge his confesssion or say anything back, even tho he was crying abt the ml not feeling the same way at jessie's house (love jessie).
the story def had plot and characterization (it is the longest) unlike the others. we see how his late adoption influenced how far he was willing to let the ml become attached and how he continued this behavior with the bed game. i could go into this more but i'll stop here.
the heart and thumb photo is the ultimate friendzone tho. also, NOT THE CARPET!!
the first story that had a conclusive ending!!!
4th is 8/10. i really enjoyed the art style, esp how they depicted the animalistic sides coming out. i actually thot it was a scam from the ml who was using hypnosis or his phermones to force mc into being his mate, but alas. overall, the plot is sound albeit simple and has a clear vision of what it wants to be & how it was executed. this is the story with the most plot which was nice but also slightly unecessary(?). idk, 2 chapters worth of backstory seemed excessive.
the amount of tropes in this was more than i expected: childhood friends, beastkin, secretly rich, misunderstandings (of a whole different type), and maybe first love(?)
what i don't understand: clearly the mc did not have the best childhood growing up but the ml also tells us that he watched over the mc (even tho he wasn't allowed to visit him). so why not sponser him/be his benefactor? like give him money or clothing in the form of donations? the ml is clearly rich so this seems like a simple solution where he could have helped while remaining anonymous. ig we'll have to wait for sides to see what his family was rly like.
AND a conclusive ENDING!!
the art at the very end was my favorite scene (tho the sex was a close second).
SPOILERS AHEAD:
1st is probably a 6.5/10. it was okay. i enjoyed how the beta was the top instead of an even stronger alpha (inserteyeroll) but the story felt not properly concluded. okay first things first, the tl was blurry and overall; not good. the plot seemed a bit ludicrous, esp with the taxi driver, but i guess it worked out? the sex was good, not top-tier or anything, but good esp if you're into bondage/whipping.
not great: the ending is very ambiguous. the chairman won't go looking for him but the top is still operating under the assumption that he's going to fight in the dog fights so the mc might be send there after his training is done? which would mean he dies obvi. the other thing is that the mc was running but ended at the same village so it was a loop? it's never clearly explained.
random thing: the ml explains that all the dogs are under his control, but the wild dogs who showup to attack humans are bloodied (so where did the blood come from). does this mean that he could have ordered the dogs to attack the mc to scare him? (idk abt this one)
note: the chapter goes from 1 to 3 and chapter 2 is somewhere in the later chapters (as an fyi)
2nd is 6.5/10.i will say that's it's not my preferred art style (which def impact my ratings) but moving on. the plot was fairly lackluster, but it's also only 5 chps, so it was never going to be amazing.
that one panel of the ml sucking the mc's nipples is so ridiculous (in a good way). and the times where he punched the mc was more of a new concept that i hadn't seem before (so yay)
ending: so confused again (like wtf, are these all supposed to be oe?). okay, so the end of ch4 shows that he's the 'toilet' but the start of ch5 shows that he's the boss' puppy. so is it a 'puppy' by morning and evening, toilet by afternoon situation?
actual ending: so the ending shows that the ml is smiling in a 'not going to happen' way, where they would never return to normal, but it's not clearly shown. the mc has his hands on the collar/chain that's placed near the ml's neck, maybe implying that he'll strangle him? or that it symbolizes how he's now the one in control again? bro idk.
random: are 1 + 2 connected since they both mention dog fights?
3rd is 9/10 and THE BEST of the 4. alright, in the very beginning, i was hoping it was freak4freak then he mentioned 'brother' (rip), then it was kind of freak4freak since they were both into the incest(??). the wedding dress in the beginning/end was def my favorite scene.
at the end of chp8, the ml confesses which is direct proof that he's in love with the mc, which is what the mc wanted to wear, but he just ignored the ml? he didn't acknowledge his confesssion or say anything back, even tho he was crying abt the ml not feeling the same way at jessie's house (love jessie).
the story def had plot and characterization (it is the longest) unlike the others. we see how his late adoption influenced how far he was willing to let the ml become attached and how he continued this behavior with the bed game. i could go into this more but i'll stop here.
the heart and thumb photo is the ultimate friendzone tho. also, NOT THE CARPET!!
the first story that had a conclusive ending!!!
4th is 8/10. i really enjoyed the art style, esp how they depicted the animalistic sides coming out. i actually thot it was a scam from the ml who was using hypnosis or his phermones to force mc into being his mate, but alas. overall, the plot is sound albeit simple and has a clear vision of what it wants to be & how it was executed. this is the story with the most plot which was nice but also slightly unecessary(?). idk, 2 chapters worth of backstory seemed excessive.
the amount of tropes in this was more than i expected: childhood friends, beastkin, secretly rich, misunderstandings (of a whole different type), and maybe first love(?)
what i don't understand: clearly the mc did not have the best childhood growing up but the ml also tells us that he watched over the mc (even tho he wasn't allowed to visit him). so why not sponser him/be his benefactor? like give him money or clothing in the form of donations? the ml is clearly rich so this seems like a simple solution where he could have helped while remaining anonymous. ig we'll have to wait for sides to see what his family was rly like.
AND a conclusive ENDING!!
the art at the very end was my favorite scene (tho the sex was a close second).
alright, bye.