Mc being like (●^o^●) what a pretty place to die <3
Anyway I liked the story overall I do think some things fell a little flat. Like it didnt really feel like the ml had feelings for the mc besides possessiveness. It didnt really feel romantic until like at the way end. And we don't even get side stories of them. Rip
Some of side characters could've been more flesh out. They're in the story alot but we never really get to know them.
And there was this "omg he knows" that kept happening. I think they could've done less of that and used those pages for more character development.
Mc being like (●^o^●) what a pretty place to die <3
Anyway I liked the story overall I do think some things fell a little flat.
Like it didnt really feel like the ml had feelings for the mc besides possessiveness. It didnt really feel romantic until like at the way end. And we don't even get side stories of them. Rip
Some of side characters could've been more flesh out. They're in the story alot but we never really get to know them.
And there was this "omg he knows" that kept happening. I think they could've done less of that and used those pages for more character development.