I was so damn excited to read this when I saw the character design and art of the first few panels but damn this story was so rushed. First of all they fell in love too damn quickly. This would've been THE PERFECT slowburn premise with enemies to lovers plot but it all went down the drain since the moment Zebb confessed and Rain reciprocated on the same day. Like at least let a week pass sheesh. And the the rest of the story was just weird af with Rain being kidnapped outta nowhere and we didn't even get a proper explanation about it just that the forest spirit fell ill and what? How was rain supposed to help? So many details were just left like that. And then Rain is suddenly Theia. Urgh it all just messy writing and wasted art.
I was so damn excited to read this when I saw the character design and art of the first few panels but damn this story was so rushed. First of all they fell in love too damn quickly. This would've been THE PERFECT slowburn premise with enemies to lovers plot but it all went down the drain since the moment Zebb confessed and Rain reciprocated on the same day. Like at least let a week pass sheesh. And the the rest of the story was just weird af with Rain being kidnapped outta nowhere and we didn't even get a proper explanation about it just that the forest spirit fell ill and what? How was rain supposed to help? So many details were just left like that. And then Rain is suddenly Theia. Urgh it all just messy writing and wasted art.