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for jealousy and separation, one of them should have just gone overseas and the other becomes anxious and jealous and then they can reunite etc etc
the kidnapping grandpa threat plot was so obviously cut short or incomplete WHAT WAS THE POINNTTT
the sex scenes were good but it was pointless to make them break up and have haebom kidnapped, beaten, threatened with rape, and lose his squishy weight. it did not make the sex scenes more impactful. if anything, it reads so oddly how cleanly everything wrapped up and haebom got over his trauma. and what about the blonde restaurant owner??