This might be a hot take but I wish there was more of an actual dialogue and not just words said in their heads. It just makes the stories too shallow with A LOTTT of over explaining and surface level repetition. I’m not sure if the author is having a hard time progressing the story or not, cause it’s showing in their work
This might be a hot take but I wish there was more of an actual dialogue and not just words said in their heads. It just makes the stories too shallow with A LOTTT of over explaining and surface level repetition. I’m not sure if the author is having a hard time progressing the story or not, cause it’s showing in their work