Chapter 13 and chapter 14 doesn't match the rest of the chapters. They and them in Asian is the gramar they use because they don't you she and he. They use pronouns they and them alot in grammar so it was confusing in chapter 13. And its a little messy but thats fine. I know translating from another language to English is hard but its all about the grammar. Putting in proper sentences so the English readers can understand. Im giving pointers since its been pointed out multiple times that they don't know what is wrong.
Chapter 13 and chapter 14 doesn't match the rest of the chapters. They and them in Asian is the gramar they use because they don't you she and he. They use pronouns they and them alot in grammar so it was confusing in chapter 13. And its a little messy but thats fine. I know translating from another language to English is hard but its all about the grammar. Putting in proper sentences so the English readers can understand. Im giving pointers since its been pointed out multiple times that they don't know what is wrong.