I've written so many comments on this manhwa its genuinely insane. And only one comment was positive while the rest was negative critiques of her progress...girl what progress?? There is no progress and it's because they author doesn't know herself what to do with the plot. It's very clear she can't write a plotline to save her life and I want to bet the only reason the first season was decently written was that she had some ghost writer guiding her and they just disappeared in the second season and she got fucked up the ass by it and didn't know where to go from there so she had to put in porn fillers to compensate for her shit writing.
The porn isn't even enjoyable it always looks like Yeseung is in severe pain from everything and Gyeol can't stop thinking without his dick honestly his Hyung should man up and beat the sense into Gyeol and tell him to get fucking real!! The author should either put the manwha on hiatus and get her shit together and make a coherent plot or she should make Gyeol a decent fucking human being that doesn't ignore all the abuse signs that are laid upon his eyes LITERALLY right in front of him.
I have never made a comment this long just complaining about a manhwa I actually liked in the beginning, this got so shit it's sad asf, if anything the plot should've have been so brutal if the author can't talk about it properly and theres no development in over twenty chapters
I've written so many comments on this manhwa its genuinely insane. And only one comment was positive while the rest was negative critiques of her progress...girl what progress?? There is no progress and it's because they author doesn't know herself what to do with the plot. It's very clear she can't write a plotline to save her life and I want to bet the only reason the first season was decently written was that she had some ghost writer guiding her and they just disappeared in the second season and she got fucked up the ass by it and didn't know where to go from there so she had to put in porn fillers to compensate for her shit writing.
The porn isn't even enjoyable it always looks like Yeseung is in severe pain from everything and Gyeol can't stop thinking without his dick honestly his Hyung should man up and beat the sense into Gyeol and tell him to get fucking real!! The author should either put the manwha on hiatus and get her shit together and make a coherent plot or she should make Gyeol a decent fucking human being that doesn't ignore all the abuse signs that are laid upon his eyes LITERALLY right in front of him.
I have never made a comment this long just complaining about a manhwa I actually liked in the beginning, this got so shit it's sad asf, if anything the plot should've have been so brutal if the author can't talk about it properly and theres no development in over twenty chapters