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Agree. I think MC is relatively well written, since she's not a personality-less power fantasy self insert... sadly all other characters' writing suffered for it.
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Agree. I think MC is relatively well written, since she's not a personality-less power fantasy self insert... sadly all other characters' writing suffered for it.
Fun read. Their relationship progress is considerably more laid out than most enemies-to-lovers "crazy psycho x skeptic mc".
Nitpicking the parts I don't like. About the main story and side story like wtf was that bs. They literally wiped out a royal family of a whole neighbor kingdom like they couldn't just fucking do that on their own. The whole arc could've been done in a few chapters.
Also dislike how they try to include "politics" bc the main villain is the king, but never included how the people actually felt. Except for that one backlash when her potion ain't worked, the citizens of the kingdom might as well be nonexistent. Tbt the world building is lacking. Mc and Ml could just be doing bullshit without consequences so idk what was the point of tryna do things the "right" way.
Ain't like they both have a moral compass until like they had kids. Mc who's the better of the two can literally only care about animals and loosely children. But will overlook deaths of the innocent even those who had been kind to her despite being an overpowered genius. Being an extra in this universe is a hellhole.