Responses
Yes!! That’s exactly how I felt, at some points I was reading then I’d stop after a while and be like wait…HUH? Lmao it really is such a shame when the dialogue is choppy and all over the place! ┗( T﹏T )┛
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Yes!! That’s exactly how I felt, at some points I was reading then I’d stop after a while and be like wait…HUH? Lmao it really is such a shame when the dialogue is choppy and all over the place! ┗( T﹏T )┛
The artwork is fantastic, but the writing is really weak. Without going into spoilers, there are way too many plot holes and far too many "just because" moments. The love triangle feels incredibly forced (although I did enjoy the second couple). As for the prison warden and Andrea, their storyline is sort of wrapped up through the author's notes, but in a very vague and rushed way.
Such a waste of beautiful artwork on a mediocre story... (〜￣△￣)〜