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anon November 3, 2026 2:34 pm

the artstyle is still good but you can see in the latest chaps its downgraded a bit sometimes the anatomy is giving alpha ceo x yn vibes or other mother from coraline or buffed slenderman

lowk disappointed in dion bro was so fine why he gotta side with mc’s evil ass “dad” (lowk the whole situation is giving hojo, lucrecia and sephiroth lore from ff7)

the ml sucks donkeykongdong, mf always jumping to conclusions and not letting the other speak then proceeds to get even madder
also their chemistry is just mehh throughout except when they reunited (memory recollection wise) in the latest chap it was actually cute yay!

storywise its honestly okay, i do find some parts are very skimmed over or just ignored and then later like mentioned like it was introduced/known in the first place (if that makes sense)
but its getting interesting now that we’re going up the climax where the discourse and drama will happen.

hopefully we touch base on mc’s past (like aftermath when he ran away), mc’s stepbrother (i hope he’s okay sob), more explanation on their power like fym devour and absorb whats the limitations, what can it be used towards as such

anyways its a good read so far, the rendering style is so nice and clean its the only reason why i stayed, i just hope the characters get to have a heart to heart talk instead of progressing to that just for some cheap horny tension scene

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