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decent story for a little quick ready, but honestly poor execution of the plot... 5/10

minami November 3, 2026 7:18 pm

i love amnesia-plot stories bc im a sucker for angst and drama, but everything here was just ..... done so poorly... right off the bat, everything went wrong. male lead was unnecessarily aggressive (which ig i can understand bc of his "aversion" to omegas), mc kinda annoys me, but i can understand that he was doing all these things because of his love and devotion to his alpha (the male lead), but christ almighty, after everything hwan did to him, he still chose to forgive him ?? maybe it's just me but that was a really silly choice, but alas, they gotta be end game, right? i just wanted him to stop acting like a martyr and just live for himself and his baby. this story could've done more if they actually fleshed out the yearning more before the baby and tried to resolve their issues (tbh idk man, i just wish jian didn't let himself become a doormat for hwan lol he wasn't selfish, just naive and silly)— and the memory-recalling part (bc it went by so damn quick, i didn't even realize he remembered everything until it had to be said LMAO i just thought he knew what to name the baby), also maybe kept the very dub-con scenes at bay (that office scene of mc and ml with the second ml was just...disturbing) while hwan is now trying to atone for his sins towards jian and there was a reason for his distrust and temper, NOTHING, and i mean nothing could've justified the shit he did to him.

the only person i truly liked was mr. yun (second male lead), because he did everything right— he was honest, respectful, and seemed to be a good person who was just caught in the middle of his father's craziness TT i really wanted him to get his own happy ending, but it seems like that is a distant possibility hahaha anyways, this story had a lot of potential, but the pacing was too fast, the plot was poorly executed, and some of the sex scenes (especially that office one) was completely unnecessary. but the baby is adorable, i love him <3

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